Saturday, September 20, 2008

second draft







oh.. is it final?

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

All your pages have so much movement!..the first one is great!

Louis Rivera said...

very beautiful spreads .. the type does feel a little plain for the joker though

nolanc said...

The spreads are expressive of the chaos of the joker character. And since it is about a singular personality, I am impressed with the variety of interpretations. I wonder if color will accentuate certain elements on the pages though. Nevertheless

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............................ said...

pick up the large "g' page from earlier on.

it's still got life.

don't know if you're finished.

i think there's room to move ahead more.

go back to the spreads, print out, hang them on your wall, look again and again.

decide little by little what needs to change.

make the changes.

printout and hang.

leave the previous under the new one.

sometimes there's something in the old one that gets left behind and needs to move forward.

look at type in the streets, shops, theatre.

everywhere.

take one idea you like and use it again and again.

in different ways.

don't stop now.

g.