Monday, September 29, 2008

3rd revise





1 comment:

............................ said...

better still.

your text blocks are still just sitting there.

they balance the boldness of the elements on the page, and relate to the subject matter and other elements, but have no movement within the text font itself.

might want to rethink the text blocks and font choices.

and use a few display faces for real.

you've distorted and stretched the fonts to suit you.

that's fine.

but, does it help you to figure which fonts will stay with you throughout your career?

and, why the same layout twice?

i know there's a reason, but it's not clear to me.

g.